Destiny

[TrueVengeance]

I saw the "Angelic Secrets" thread, which made me think to post this.

I'm writing a spinoff to Buffy, called "Destiny". It takes place far in the future. Long story short, the slayer line dies off, and for many years there is no slayer. Until Kayla Mathews (Kirsten Bell), is called. Her and her "Scoobies" have to face off against the forces of darkness. Oh yeah....and a certain someone is back from the dead to help Kayla!

It's not very far along yet, but it's getting there! I am looking for some cowriters, if anyones interested. All I have are two helpers, who are just more like plot and site helpers rather then writers.

Here's the cast list:

Kayla Matthews....Kristen Bell
Lauren Parham....Holly Marie Combs
Jason Spencer....Julian McMahon
Cody Morgan.....Steve Burton
and Amber Bensen as Tara

Once again...if anyone's interested in helping, please let me know!

Oooh, here's a banner I made for it
i85.photobucket.com/albums/k50/BuffyAnya/destinysitebanner1.jpg

[Drama]

Sounds like an interesting series, especially with bringing back Tara.

[TrueVengeance]

Thanks! I dunno what made me bring back Tara really, but i thought it might make it interesting.

[Drama]

I liked her character and the way she practiced magic. Willow...so unbelievable to me for her to gain power like that, especially loving Charmed so much. This mortal girl gets into wicca and she gets that much power? *eye roll*

[TrueVengeance]

Oooh, new idea for thread!

Anywho, I actually thought it was clever! Although, I don't understand why she was suddenly more powerful then Tara. Tara had been doing that her whole life, while Willow had done it a few years.

[leo]

I'll help because i love charmed reality reset and helping to write with you would be my pleasure. Just email me about it if you need my help. I can help you write, think of ideas and edit for you. I'll even post. So remember my name is Leo and i want to help you and if you want help on charmed then i can to.

[leo]

Leo again after seeing the banner i really want to help but is the project still alive and will you let me know

[TrueVengeance]

Oh yeah, its alive. I'll pm you info about it. And thanks!

[leo]

I think this is the right place to post my story, sorry if it isn't but would you pass it on to where it suppose to go then. If i did make the team write me in charmed reality reset. My username is Leo or on here my username for Destiny is Prueisgreat
I wrote this story a day after Andy's funeral took place and how Prue must be feeling and thinking. Some parts have the script in it not a whole lot but just some diologe from Deja Vu All over again. I tried to make it as sad as possile and I want to know if it made you sad or tear up.

I hope to know by tomorrow if i made it. Also when we start writting and the code to get in the brain storming department but i really want to write these stories because I want to be a great write and i think this could help me. Email me in both Charmed reality reset and Destiny.

Andy

(Prue sat on her bed with tearful eyes. She had the book of shadows with her and two framed pictures with her. One of her and Andy. Her clock said it was close to 1:00. She was so tired but she couldn't sleep, because she had just lost Andy and she wanted to find a spell to reverse time or at least to talk to him. She had earlier gone into the attic and lite five white candles in a circle. She stood by the book as she said the words.)

Prue: Hear these words, hear my cry. (A tear fell from her eye.) Spirits from the other side. Come to us, who call you near. Come to us and settle hear.

(She looked up with her heart full of hope as white orbs formed inside the circle.)

Prue: Andy?

(Her hope was replaced by dispair. Grams stood there.)

Prue: Grams what are you doing here. I wanted Andy. (Prue looked at her sad face.) I'm sorry.
Grams: It's okay my dear, I understand how your feeling.
Prue: How could you possibly? I just lost the love of my life.
Grams: I felt the same way when your mother died.
Prue: I guess you do. Grams, where is Andy?
Grams: Prue it breaks my heart to have to tell you this, but your love for him still burns within you. He's gone and seeing him now. Him just being here, keeps him alive for you and you'll never move on.

(Prue wiped a tear from her eye.)

Prue: His he okay and happy?
Grams: I can't tell you.
Prue: Please Grams.
Grams: It hurts me to see you this way. Yes, but that is all i will say on that matter.)
Prue: Thank you.
Grams: Prue honey, mourn but step forward and live your life. Andy loved you and died to save you. Don't let him die in vain, if you die inside and let yesterday's funeral become your life then he did it for nothing. Because your already dead.
Prue: I will tr....(Her voice couldn't keep the lump down any more and it crackled her voice.)
Grams: I know it hurts, but destiny has something still in store for you. You might not know it yet but you still have a destiny. Remember what Andy said to you before he left.
Prue: Everything happens for a reason.
Grams: Forwell my darling. Bless it be my darling.

(She disappeared in white orbs with her hand out stretched to her.)

(Prue had thought about what she said but she couldn't see a future without Andy. So she took the book down stairs and grabbed her and Andy's picture as a motivater. Yet she couldn't find a spell. She spoke into the air as if he could hear her.)

Prue: Andy, I'm trying but why did you have to lie to me. I tried to warn you. (Her mind wondered back to that day.)

[Scene: Park. Andy and Prue are there. Phoebe had a premonition that Rodriguz had killed Andy.]
Andy: Has Phoebe ever been wrong about her premonitions before?
Prue: No. But the good news is every other time we've been able to affect the outcome. Stop the demon or warlock before...
Andy: Before I get killed. Can I get that in writing?
Prue: Andy, you just have to be extra careful until we figure out who this demon is and why he's after you, okay? (Silence.) Andy.
Andy: I was just thinking... what if the demon is Rodriguez?
Prue: Why would you say that?
Andy: He pulled me in the station house this morning. I thought he was gonna arrest me. What he really wanted was a meeting with you.
Prue: Meet with me? Why?
Andy: Because he thinks his partner was killed by a supernatural being and somehow, I don't know how, Prue, he knows you're a witch.
Prue: How would he know that unless...
Andy: Unless he was the demon.
Prue: Alright, uh, tell Rodriguez to meet me at the manor at 6:00.
Andy: It's too dangerous, Prue.
Prue: I don't have a choice. If I don't meet with him, he'll frame you and try to expose me.
Andy: But if he is a demon and it turns out to be a trap?
Prue: And I'll have Piper and Phoebe there to back me up, the power of three.
Andy: Plus one. Me.
Prue: No. You can't be there, Andy. That's where you were in Phoebe's premonition when ... just promise me you'll stay away.
Andy: I can't do that, Prue.
Prue: I mean it. Don't make me use my magic on you. (They smile.) I don't want anything to happen to you, Andy. You know how much I still care for you.
Andy: Okay, I promise.
(Those last words repeated it self in her mind over and over. I promise...I promise. A lie was what it truely was.)
(Present)
Prue: Andy, i could have did it without you. (Yet her heart she knew it was a lie.)
(Past)
(The doorbell rings.)
Phoebe: I'll get it. (The doorbell rings a couple more times.) All right already.
(The door flies open, Rodriguez's eyes glow red and his power throw's Phoebe against the wall and she rolls down the stairs. Piper enters the room.)
Piper: Phoebe!
(The lightning then hits Piper and she crashes through the glass door. He then tries to get Prue but her power makes the lightning fly back into him. He explodes and vanishes.)
Prue: Oh my God, no. (She runs over to Piper and then Phoebe. She's crying.)
Prue: Their dead. no!
(That was how Tempus and Rodriguez would have had it if not for Andy.)
Prue: At least I knew how you felt about about me before you left and save us.

(Past. In the same Park.)
Prue: We'll just have to take our chances.
Andy: You could get killed, Prue.
Prue: I mean it. This is not your fight. Don't make me use my magic on you. Andy, I would die if anything happened to you. I love you.
Andy: I love you too, Prue.
(They hug.)
[Scene: Outside manor. Andy's in his car. Rodriguez walks past Kit and Kit growls. Rodriguez's eyes glow red and Kit runs away. Andy sees it and grabs his gun.]
Andy: Oh my God, Prue.
[Inside manor. Phoebe's reading the Book of Shadows.]
Phoebe: The devil's sorcerer, Tempus. He can manipulate time anyway he chooses.
Piper: Does it say how to vanquish him?
Phoebe: Uh, take him out of the time that he's in. What ever that means.
(Rodriguez kicks open the door and throws lightning at Prue, but Piper pushes her out of the way just in time and they fall to the floor. Andy runs in.)
Andy: No!!
(He shoots at Rodriguez and Rodriguez throws lightning at him.)
Phoebe: Andy!
(Andy flies through the air and hits a glass cabinet. Piper freezes Rodriguez.)
Piper: Are you okay?
Phoebe: Yeah, is Prue okay?
Piper: Yeah, she's out cold. (They see Andy and run over to him. Piper feels his pulse.) Oh my God. He's dead.
(He at least told her that he was leaving in the most loving way possible.)
Andy's voice: Prue. Prue. Come to me, Prue.
(We enter Prue's dream. She and Andy are there. There's a seat swing surrounded by fog.)
Prue: Andy? What's going on? Where are we?
Andy: I'm not quite sure really. I hoped I'd end up here, but not so soon. One thing I do know though is that I'm staying. You're not.
Prue: I don't understand.
Andy: I broke my promise, Prue. I came to your house tonight. Turns out Phoebe's premonition was one you couldn't stop after all. Weren't supposed to stop.
Prue: Wait a minute, Andy, no.
Andy: It's okay, Prue, really, trust me. This is my destiny. I know that now. Yours is to continue on. Everything happens for a reason, remember you taught me that.
Prue: This isn't fair.
Andy: You need to go back. You need to keep the time loop from being reset again or you and your sisters will be killed. And I will have died in vein.
Prue: I'll kill Rodriguez for this.
Andy: No, you won't. You're not a murderer, Prue, you're a good person who does good things.
Prue: I don't wanna lose you.
Andy: Don't worry. You won't. (They kiss.) I'll always be there for you, Prue. (He disappears.)
Phoebe's voice: Prue, come on, honey. Prue. Prue.

[Then Prue had to do the thing, that she regreted now. She let Andy go and said the spell that would end the time loop and Andy to remain dead. Tempus had created a time loop so that every time Rodriguez was killed the day would start over.]

[Back at the manor.]
Piper: Prue, come on, wake up, sweetie.
(She wakes up. They help her off the floor.)
Phoebe: Easy, easy.
Prue: Where is Andy?
Phoebe: Prue, something terrible has happened.
(She sees Andy lying on the floor with a blanket covering him.)
Prue: Oh my God.
Piper: It all happened so fast, Prue. He ran in the door when Rodriguez attacked. He was trying to save us.
Prue: And he'll succeed. Where's the Book of Shadows?
Phoebe: It's right here. Why?
Prue: Where's the spell that you saw to accelerate time?
Rodriguez: What are you doing?
Phoebe: There.
Rodriguez: What's going on?
Piper: But we don't want to accelerate time, we want to reverse it.
Prue: No, we don't, trust me. The only chance that we have to get rid of Tempus is to do this by breaking the time loop, okay.
Phoebe: But if we break the time loop we won't be able to save Andy.
Prue: I know.
Piper: Prue, are you sure?
Prue: No, I'm not. (She starts reading the spell.) "Winds of time gather 'round, Give me wings to speed my way..."
Rodriguez: Wait a minute...
Prue: "Rush me on my journey forward, let tomorrow be today."
Rodriguez: What's happening?
(The hands on the clock speed around the clock face. Tempus turns into fire and disappears. They untie Rodriguez and as he starts to leave, he throws an energy ball at them but Prue reflects it back to him and he is vanquished.)
Prue: We may not be murderers but we're no angels either.
(She walks over to Andy, kneels next to him and starts crying.)
[Scene: Cemetery. Prue, Piper, Phoebe and Morris are there. Prue lays a rose on top of Andy's coffin.]
(Present)
Prue: I love you Andy. (A breeze entered her room but no window was open. She knew it had to be Andy. His lat words to her.)
Andy: I'll always be there for you Prue.
(She got up and went down stairs. She was going to visit Andy.)
[Cemetery]

(Prue looked down at his tombstone. She layed the rose that she bought for him on his grave. She had planned to visit him earlier today but being here now felt right.)

Prue: I think about you all the time now Andy. I miss you so much that I feel like i could...(She couldn't finish because seeing his grave made her heart drop like a stone.)
Prue: Andy, you made the greatest sacrifice for me and I can never pay you back.
(Tears streamed down her cheecks.)
Prue: I just wish that i could now what destiny will bring me next, because i couldn't think that i could fall in love with someone else ever.

(Prue saw blue lights shinning from behind her.)
Prue: Leo, what are you doing here?
Leo: I felt that you were in pain and i came to check on you. You seem okay.
Prue: Emonitionally and Mentally, no.
Leo: Andy?
(Prue buried her face in her hands. She knotted her head.)
Leo: It's not your fault. He wanted you to live. If he lost you Prue then his life would have been empty without you in it.
(Prue looked up at him. Her eyes producing tears. She was angry.)
Prue: I killed him! I said the spell to undo the time loop and I sent him to his grave! I'm suppose to be a mighty charmed one and warrior for the innocent, but I couldn't save the only man I ever loved! Do you know how empty I feel inside?
Leo: Prue...
Prue: Leave me.
Leo: Prue...
Prue: I said leave me! (She jerked her hands up and Leo went off the ground backwards. He landed with a thud.)
Prue: I'm so sorry. (She fell onto his grave and sobbed.)
(Leo orbed out. He knew the only person that could put her heart and mind at rest. He would have to break a few rules and get in seriouse trouble if he was caught, but he had to save Prue from herself.)
[Prue saw flashing blu lights again.]
Prue: Leo I told you to leave me alone, is that that to much to ask!
Andy: It's not Leo.
(Prue recognized that voice. Prue looked behind her with want and hope.)
Prue: Andy....Is it really you?
Andy: Yes, Aren't you a sight for sore eyes.
(Prue ran up to hug him and he held out his arms as she wrapped her arms around his waist. It felt so good to be in his arms again.)
Prue: Andy, I miss you so much and i love you.
(Andy and Prue looked into each others eyes.)
Andy: I miss you to Prue and I love you so much. (He kissed her forehead as she smiled.)
Prue: Wait i thought the elders said I couldn't see you for awhile.
Andy: Leo told me that you really needed to see me and I couldn't past up the opportunity to see my favorite girl.
Prue: You have to stay.
Andy: I can't Prue. I'm sorry.
(Prue's heart sank like a stone once more.)
Prue: I won't lose you again.
Andy: Prue listen. I would love to stay here with you but sadly it was not ment to be. I have other charges to take care of.
Prue: Your a..
Andy: Yeah, a white-lighter. All the good things i did as a police officer helped, but saving the charmed ones and in turn saving future innocents and the world earned me the position.
Prue: Same old Andy, Always the over achiever even in death. (They both laughed at that.)
Andy: Prue, it wasn't your fault that I died. You had to say that spell, to stop Tempus and Rodriguz from killing you all. I laid my life down for you because i love you. Even when I first saw you after all those years in the hospital, I loved you. I first knew when I first met you that we were soul mates.
Prue: I felt the same. I feel so much better.
Andy: I'll come and check on you sometime.
Prue: I love that.
Andy: Let me take you home.
(Prue held onto him as they orbed into her room. Prue let down and sat down. Andy moved the book and smiled as he moved their picture. He pulled down the covers and turned to her.)
Andy: Prue, It's ready.
(He saw that she was sleeping. He picked her up and layed her down. He covered her up and kissed her on the forehead before orbing out.)
Andy: Good night Prue.
[The next morning Piper and Phoebe went up to Prue's room and try to comfort her. Leo had told them the events of the night. They saw she was still asleep but they saw she had a smile on her face. They closed her door and smiled at each other. They went down stairs.)
{Prue's dream.}
(Prue and Andy are sitting on their swing, holding hands as they look up at the night sky.)
Prue: Andy the romantic.
Andy: Prue the lovely.
Prue: I feel so relieved and happy since that day.
Andy: I feel complete just sitting here with you.
Prue: So do I.
(They kissed and went back to looking at the stars.)

The End

[leo]

I only wrote it here because i got confused on the web page of where to send it to and since you visit here then i thought you could look over it this way becasue i really want to do this. Leo

[Astral Echo]

The only thing I would say is about cast choices and some nitpicks about the names. I know how popular the name of Matthews is but I think as the shows of Buffy and Charmed are so similar you can't really have the surname of your lead of a Buffy Spin Off as Matthews.

Also using both Julian and Holly in the same show after Charmed is a little, I dunno I just would like to see someone else. You have a whole country of actors to pick from. Try being a little more adventrous.

[TrueVengeance]

You wouldn't believe how many times I changed actresses for the role Holly is in, and its still subject to change. Julian however, is staying.

I also agree about the Matthews, and I've got a few other ideas in my head. We're all still brainstorming, so anything could change now.

Also, Leo, your in